NC: The Lab cites many other writers using quotes and examples. What was the research process like for this project and how did you select the references that ended up in the final version?
MCD: First I’ll tell you an anecdote, then I’ll answer your question. About twenty years ago, I taught an MFA course at SFSU called Uses of Personal Experience for the first of many times. Each week we examined exceptional work that, in some way, incorporated autobiography. At the end of the 15 week semester, the students were asked by the university to fill out a teacher evaluation. Two of the comments I received: I didn’t know I was signing up for gay and lesbian studies course; and, I felt the readings leaned heavily into feminist and world lit more than regular contemporary fiction. I took this as a compliment, not a criticism; encouragement to be even more conscious of choices like those I’d been already making on gut instinct.
Alice and I each took on the complete first draft of 5 of the 10 chapters in the book and then we switched back and forth many times. The person who did the first draft also came up with the first set of excerpts and quotes. The second person added. With the back and forth we shuffled, looking for what would most effectively enable the reader of our book to write more deeply or closer to their ideal. Like twenty years ago with the selections for my MFA class, the examples I chose in my five chapters all had one thing in common: excellence. I wanted originality in form and content. Alice, too.
Our tastes aren't always the same, but we each have an exacting eye for work that may inspire students. When reading the excerpts in her five first-draft chapters, the ratio of already-read/discovered was about 50/50 and vice versa. Not once did Alice or I come across a piece one suggested that the other wanted to cut. But there’s a limit to what can be contained in a book.
It’s heartbreaking to cut great examples. Most often we did so because we used so many examples our editor (or our permissions budget) made us choose fewer. Especially heartbreaking were the former student examples that had to be cut. Some of the writers we reference in the book are extremely well known, but as many or more are not yet as well known. Several are yet to be published.
We’re proud of the fact that our bibliography contains as much variation as it does. Variation is glorious. Our authors and their styles have life experiences and points of view that illuminate and portray so many literary styles as well as communities and generations.
NC: There are separate chapters for distinct genres, but you also urge your readers to explore beyond their intended or chosen genre. What value do you find in experimenting with other genres and how does it service readers at different writing levels and stages?
MCD: DiVinci said, “To develop a complete mind: Study the science of art; Study the art of science. Learn how to see. Realize that everything connects to everything else.”
Picasso: “The artist is a receptacle for emotions that come from all over the place: from the sky, from the earth, from a scrap of paper, from a passing shape, from a spider’s web.”
Alice and I believe that the strategies writers use to make their audience feel and think are genre-fluid. It’s often a question of proportion. A poet whose work seems plotless isn’t refusing the strategy of the fiction writer who engages it; they instead understand that refraining from the use of the strategy gets them closer. Same with the fiction writer who refrains from line breaks or rhymes. Each writer can employ the strategy of the other, and by experimenting with the strategies frequently used outside one’s chosen genre, two good things happen: a writer breaks open and gets closer to her goals by trying then incorporating the strategy–or–she gets closer to her goals by trying then refusing the strategy and in so doing discovers what, apart from the strategy, she needs.
NC: The “Write Now” sections span throughout the book, from the “creative woolgathering” through experimentation with different genres and into revision. Can you speak more about the importance of this interactive feature of the book?
MCD: One of my mantras is “Great writing doesn’t start with craft, it starts with obsession.” Another has become: “Do first explain later.”
I’m fascinated by brain science. I don’t claim to be any kind of expert, but decades of observation in the classroom shows that the subconscious gives us the stuff of good art: what’s most odd, queer, stirring, mysterious, strange. Getting something from this part of our brains down on paper first, even if you have no idea why or where it’s leading you or even if it has anything to do with a project you have in mind is ten times more powerful than spending an hour listening to a teacher explain a concept you should try at home.
We might ask you to make two lists, one of your character’s (or narrator’s or speaker’s) fears and another of their desires. We might then do a second or third deepening. An example could be,”Find the lie in the list.” And then “Write a letter to your desire list from your fear.”
With all that on the page, we can use it as the original material to experiment with and shape using craft strategies. Say, of a topic like characterization.
The writer can compare what she has on the page to the examples we choose and see if those characterization strategies fit, or make the piece stronger, more compelling. If they don’t, we encourage the writer to modify, change, ignore and try something else.
NC: The Lab is instructional while also encouraging its reader to take risks, to shape the described exercises to themselves, to adopt the practices into their own creative process. Ideally, what do you hope your readers take away from this book and how does the book fit into a writer’s toolkit for future use?
MCD: My first writing mentors were the late greats Janice Mirikitani and June Jordon, who took me (and what I felt and had to say) seriously. This was in the early 90s in San Francisco, where I lived after escaping an inhospitable place. There I was, a lost feminine gay boy dropout and runaway in the Tenderloin neighborhood of San Francisco. I didn’t grow up reading, but during the worst of the AIDS years, I attended ACT UP and QUEER NATION meetings and rallies, and heard about and started reading Queer activists and artists.
Already in me was an overwhelming abundance of imagination and obsessions and fears and desires and I thought maybe the container of the novel or memoir could hold some of it.
By then, two of my closest friends had died, at age 30, of AIDS. I thought I was, at 20 years old, next. There was so much urgency and passion in me but zero skill, technique, craft, strategy. Jan and June recognized this in me, and made me curious about how more academic-seeming study could actually help hone my joy and passion and grief. The strategies didn’t always fit my goals or my projects, but thinking about and trying those strategies helped every single time.
Prior to meeting these mentors, school and church had always been a place where there were adults or experts who had the answers and children and students who didn’t. These new mentors didn’t claim to have any definitive answers. They were thrilled when we said something they hadn’t thought of, and even said, aloud, “here and in art there are no rules.” So there was constant encouragement to take what they taught not as dictates but as choices, choices you could pass on, break, mold, and make it your own. If I can pass the ethos of those classes forward to someone who needs them as much as I did, I’d be thrilled.